• In addition to properly formatting their abstracts, international authors must also pay attention to theproper use of English writing conventions and grammar.

除了摘要的格式正确外，还要注意 正确使用英文写作习惯和语法

• Next we look at some actual case studies taken from edited abstracts.

案例研究

• “…complex adsorbed at the hanging mercury drop electrode (HMDE)…”
→ “…complex adsorbed to a hangingmercury drop electrode (HMDE)…”
EXPLANATION: first mention

首次提到

• “…linearly with the increment of the concentrations…”
→ “…linearly with increasing concentrations…”
EXPLANATION: not concise

不简练

• “…not in … such as L-dopa, pinephrine ... pyrogallic acid (PA), and gallic acid (GA).”
→ “…not in … such as L-dopa, epinephrine ... pyrogallic acid (PA), or gallic acid (GA).”
EXPLANATION: in a list, negative = “or”,positive = “and”

在列举时，否定的用“or”，肯定的用 “and”